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ACT 1 - SETUP6
ACT 2 - CONFRONTATION5
ACT 3 - RESOLUTION3
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Scene 1 · 3 Comments
Taylor Kim10m ago
Line 3
Love the visual. Consider adding a sense of scale in the second sentence.
Jordan Lee25m ago
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This line hints at the world's mystery nicely.
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Riley Chen1h ago
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Maybe foreshadow the pulse here a bit earlier?
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